The House on Mango Street
Below is my essay. You may need to zoom in to read it, I am unable to make it any larger unfortunately. Sorry for the inconvenience.
The original grade I received for this was a 92 but I was able to revise some of the mistakes I make and got a 97. While writing this essay I learned how to create a thesis and then write a multi-paragraph essay. I think I still need a little work on concluding essays. I feel that my essay could have had a stronger ending.
The original grade I received for this was a 92 but I was able to revise some of the mistakes I make and got a 97. While writing this essay I learned how to create a thesis and then write a multi-paragraph essay. I think I still need a little work on concluding essays. I feel that my essay could have had a stronger ending.